This is my favorite stanza in this poem, and I have 2 pieces of feedback on the piece as a whole:

Style - I really like your use of repetition! It gives the poem a good sense of rhythm, and I appreciate the use of the question, "Should I say..." as a way to continually engage the reader!

Ideas - I like your use of imagery, since I can see you really value your heritage and it gives such a vivid picture which others can enjoy too.

Great read!